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  • The Story of Muk Utep by Belenos
    Added on Dec 4, 2012

    c.400 -- A hitherto unkown warrior named Muk Utep sacks the twelve tribes at Gol Krathu with an army of terrible barbarians out of the northwest. The tribes called the Elves of Mallok and the Twin Warlocks are among the conquered. The city-state of Tuluk begins to rise under Utep the Sun King.


    "There is something depressing about the ending of these battles," Muk Utep
    thought as he stared out over the canyon below. Thin trails of smoke curled
    up from the ashen remains of numerous fires as a couple of physicians worked
    their way through fallen warriors. Muk crossed his arms and let out a slow
    sigh as he surveyed the ruins of the battle scene before him. "How many times
    has this played out before?" Muk thought as a hot desert breeze stirred up the
    sand beneath his feet.

    Muk was a large man. Near eight feet from head to toe, he stood well above
    most men. With a musculature borne of a lifetime of battling, Muk was easily the
    most impressive warrior on any battlefield. His thickly braided hair shone
    with the color of a Zalathan sunset, a deep crimson not dissimilar to the
    blood he had spilled so many times during battle. Crimson is a color he knew
    all too well. Muk's prowess in the art of war was unparalleled. It was known
    far and wide that no one could defeat the massive warrior, no matter how small
    an army he wielded.

    Muk turned his attention from the battlefield and watched as a man by
    the name of Ameit, a wiry man with greying hair the color of withering numut
    vines approached from below. This man, a lieutenant falling directly under
    Muk Utep himself, paused then offered a shallow bow to Muk. Muk barely tipped
    his head in a return acknowledgment.

    "Sir," stated Ameit, calmly with the quiet self assurance of a victor,
    "The last of the tribe has scattered. They are no longer a threat to our men."
    Muk shrugged with a casual movement, as if the news held no more importance than
    announcing that the evening meal was ready.

    "They have contacted your mind have they not Lieutenant? Agreed to the
    meeting of the twelve?"

    "Yes, Warlord," Ameit stammered, unsure of where to continue. It was
    unsettling when Muk Utep seemed to know things before they happened.

    "We will meet in a month's time, here in the Gol Krathu," Muk continued on,
    "We will meet at the site of the final battle. There is much we need to do,
    tell the men to start preparations."

    Ameit drew himself to attention, nodding quickly at Muk, "Yes, Warlord."
    Ameit paused and looked to Muk with a tired tone in his voice. "Will this work,
    Warlord? I mean, can the twelve tribes really be brought together in this
    vision of yours? It is so hard to tell what will happen in the future. Our
    luck could simply just run out."

    Drawing himself up to his full eight feet, Muk Utep shifted his gaze to Ameit,
    allowing the tone of his baritone voice to ring out over the canyon. "We will
    succeed, as long as everyone does exactly as I direct them."

    "Yes, Warlord." Amiet recoiled at Muk's words. "I'll not doubt your
    directions again." Amiet quickly scrambled down the path toward the canyon
    below, leaving the large man behind.

    Muk Utep closed his eyes and took a deep breath, allowing the visions to
    spill before him. Before him lay crystalline threads, each stretching off
    into the distance. There were only a few threads close to him, yet as they
    stretched out in the distance they branched off numerous times, becoming
    tangled and indistinct. Muk took one of those threads and rode it, traveling
    along as he watched future events unfold.

    You see, Muk Utep's prowess in battle lay in the simple fact that Muk could
    see the future that lay before him. Muk could travel paths that would show
    defeat and victory. As long as he chose the correct path, he was unstoppable,
    for who could ever stop a foe who always knew what you were going to do
    before even you did?

    Muk knew this particular thread well, he traveled it often, yet no matter
    how often he traveled it, he could not grasp its meaning. This twisted path
    led to an unimaginable strangeness, to a world with familiar elements to it,
    yet other elements so utterly bizarre he could not fathom their purpose. He
    backtracked into more familiar territory, away from the strange future. The
    threads that lay closest to the present were much more comforting. The closer
    they were to now, there were fewer threads, and each vision was clearer.
    To dwell too long in the far future would risk madness.

    Muk once again opened his eyes and felt the hot desert wind upon his skin.
    He turned his attention to the canyons below, and the fallen warriors he had
    so readily defeated. He shrugged his shoulders and walked the path to the
    battlefield. He would do what he could to tend to his defeated enemy and
    prepare for the upcoming meeting. The troubling dark visions would as always
    need to wait for another day.
    "There is something depressing about the ending of these battles," Muk Utep
    thought as he stared out over the canyon below. Thin trails of smoke curled
    up from the ashen remains of numerous fires as a couple of physicians worked
    their way through fallen warriors. Muk crossed his arms and let out a...
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