Original Submissions by Bakha

  • Long Black Veil
    Added on May 2, 2005

    Based on a traditional folksong.


    Ten years ago, on a cold dark night
    Someone was killed, 'neath Lirathu's light
    There were few at the scene, but they all agreed
    That the slayer who ran, looked a lot like me

    The Templar said son, what is your alibi
    If you were somewhere else, then you won't have to die
    I spoke not a word, though it meant my life
    For I'd been in the arms of my best friend's wife

    Chorus
    She walks these dunes in a long black veil
    She visits my grave when the night winds wail
    Nobody knows, nobody sees
    Nobody knows but me

    Oh, the blade's raised high and eternity's near
    She stood in the crowd and shed not a tear
    But late at night, when Whira moans
    In a long black veil, she cries over my bones

    Chorus
    She walks these dunes in a long black veil
    She visits my grave when the night winds wail
    Nobody knows, nobody sees
    Nobody knows but me
    Ten years ago, on a cold dark night

    Someone was killed, 'neath Lirathu's light

    There were few at the scene, but they all agreed

    That the slayer who ran, looked a lot like me


    The Templar said son, what is your alibi

    If you were somewhere else, then you won't have to die

    I spoke not a word,...
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  • Don't Take Your Sword to Town
    Added on May 2, 2005

    Based on a traditional folksong, the story of a young boy who goes to town to become a man.


    A young scrubhopper named Gil
    Grew restless on the farm
    A boy filled with wanderlust
    Who really meant no harm
    He changed his clothes and shined his boots
    And combed his dark hair down
    And his mother cried as he walked out;

    "Don't take your sword to town, son
    Leave your sword at home, Gil
    Don't take your sword to town."

    He sang a song as on he rode,
    His sword hung at his hips
    He rode into a spice town,
    A smile upon his lips
    He stopped and walked into a bar and laid his obsidian down
    But his mother's words echoed again;

    Refrain:
    "Don't take your sword to town, son
    Leave your sword at home, Gil
    Don't take your sword to town."

    He smoked his first spice then to calm his shaking hand
    And tried to tell himself at last he had become a man
    A dusty outrider at his side began to laugh him down
    And he heard again his mother's words;

    Refrain:
    "Don't take your sword to town, son
    Leave your sword at home, Gil
    Don't take your sword to town."

    Gil was raged by spice and reached for his sword to draw
    But the stranger drew his sword and struck before Gil even saw
    As he fell to the floor the crowd all gathered 'round
    And wondered at his final words;

    Refrain:
    "Don't take your sword to town, son
    Leave your sword at home, Gil
    Don't take your sword to town."
    A young scrubhopper named Gil

    Grew restless on the farm

    A boy filled with wanderlust

    Who really meant no harm

    He changed his clothes and shined his boots

    And combed his dark hair down

    And his mother cried as he walked out;


    "Don't take your sword to town, son

    Leave your sword at home, Gil

    Don't...
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